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aching roots of listing wishes
uprooted skyward when gusts bow limbs together
dancing uneven night rows away
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(c) JAM 01Feb2012
Thoughtling Thursday: Resurrections
02 Thursday Feb 2012
Posted in CREATIVE WRITING, POETRY, WRITING
02 Thursday Feb 2012
Posted in CREATIVE WRITING, POETRY, WRITING
Love that pic and the pic you create with words.
Thanks, Shonnie, it was fun xo
A beautiful “A Dance of Trees,” poem. I liked this very much.
So nice to see you, glad you enjoyed. See you soon
Trees sometimes frighten me,
but then I think of them as
friendly places to lean
a bicycle against.
Ah, yes. What a revelation. Trees and bicycles work well together. LOL Seems we will never tire of those tyres, lol.
Dancing uneven… I love this, great to see you write like this. I find some images of trees really creepy but barely notice the real ones around me sometimes. This image though is just outstanding and beautiful.
Thank you for dropping by with your lovely comments
I find trees of all varieties some of the most enchanting of natures flora. Lovely picture and poem.
They are! I so love “leaf song,” it just leaves me awestruck and I even tried to record it once but it’s never the same as being there under the tree when the leaves sing to you. Glad you like, see you soon.
love this, the second line esp. – Corin
Thank you, Corin, for the read and the comments. See you soon
Hey there! Finally getting to catch up on your blog. Sorry it’s been so long. I LOVE when you do poetry. I wish I could do that… but it’s just not in my genes.
Xoxo Pam
Ah, thanks kindly, Pam, you weave your own unique poetic magic as your beautiful pages attest to. So glad you visited mine, see you soon
Beautiful poem.
Glad you enjoyed, wise woman!