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haiku, Literature, poem, stories, words
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good hooks swing me high
above
myself
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emotional eating disorderdisorderdisorder
up down too much too little too far
looking pretty in my coffin
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dust ignored weaves thick creatures
trusted broom bristles gather sweeping sweeping sweeping
electrical circuit bound shadows remain
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(c)JAM 10Jan2013
This was a really nourishing and thought provoking little number. I don;t know emotional eating disorderdisorderdisorder
what the 3>3>3> thing is all about, but I loved
” emotional eating disorderdisorderdisorder
up down too much too little too far
looking pretty in my coffin
So evocative and economically expressed
Thanks, Peter. I was anorexic, bulemic in early years- once lost 30 lbs in one month, I think I was 16 . Became an emotional eater… still working on that. Just did some enlightening group work through the Women’s Centre and it’s amazing how much we do/our choices are related directly to emotions. Now, if I could only find the disconnect link, lol.
economically express, such a great compliment, thank you for visiting! See you soon
(C) JAM Blues.
Too perceptive, M. The first was a dare/prompt, the second a thought after taking an Eating Disorders 7 week group/course and looking at my own emotional eating/coping eating or not eating I do to keep control of things I cannot truly control anyway, the last from actually sweeping what I thought a dust twine was truly a shadow. See, you just gotta write what you know, lol.
Check you out! Nice.
LOL And you! Thanks for visiting, L, will stop by your pages asap