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moss drapes trunks once live
branches circling centuries anchored in truth lore
pride never survives human nature
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JAM 8Feb2013
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08 Friday Feb 2013
Posted in CREATIVE WRITING, POETRY, WRITING
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I love this last line. Full of pithy truths . Brilliant
Struck dumb (and you know how hard that is to do to me, lol)… all I can say is thank you, thank you, thank you, Peter xo
“pride never survives human nature” Now that is a powerful line. Pride is human nature and it is what will bring people and their worlds down every time…Brilliant!
Thanks kindly, wisdom woman of the word, your feedback means a lot to me. Brilliant, huh. I could get a swollen ego if you keep this up, lol. Best of luck with your funny book! Much love xo
What a thoughtful poem to go with the photo xx
Nice to see you, Christy! Happy Sunday to you xo
Ooooh and happy first Family Day for BC
Yes and to you as well, I forgot about it but it’s nice to have a break before Easter. Hope you have fun on yours xo